Guest Post from Christine Combe
Hello Again, Christine! It's always a pleasure to welcome one of my favorite fellow Janeites back to the blog, especially when it means celebrating a new release!
Thank you for having me, Jayne —
I am so very happy to be stopping by today.
Greetings fellow Austenians, and
welcome to the next stop on my blog tour! I am very excited to be visiting Do Not Faint once again to talk about a
new book. A Promise of Forever is my
second standalone Austen variation and the fourth novel I’ve published since I
began in the genre in 2018, and I really hope you’ll like it as much as I’ve
enjoyed writing it.
In this new Austenesque tale,
Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner are Elizabeth’s parents and she grows up happy and
carefree in Lambton. At sixteen, Lizzy meets and falls in love with Fitzwilliam
Darcy, future Master of Pemberley. The couple decides to elope but they are
torn apart by their closest relatives, and when reunited must determine whether
the pain of the years that have passed can be overcome to regain the love that
was lost.
Now, to further intrigue you,
here’s the third part of chapter one:
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Darcy paced under the willow
tree—their willow tree—waiting for her. Hoping she got the note and not one of her parents. He knew they
would approve of his relationship with Elizabeth no more than his own parents
would. They’d tell their daughter to give up any hope of his marrying her. That
he was too far above her station.
It was true, of course. He and
Elizabeth both knew that was how society viewed things. But it wasn’t how they viewed things—not anymore. He loved
her. She loved him.
To Darcy, that their attachment
was genuine was all that mattered. He had enough money for both of them.
He whirled as the branches
rustled behind him; Elizabeth was here. He’d hoped that she would come to him
at the start of her daily walk and not the end of it, and nearly ran as he
crossed to her and took her in his arms, pressing his lips to hers. She
stiffened, resisted for a moment, then melted into him and returned his passion
with equal fervor.
“My love,” he said when at last
they parted for breath. “Whatever is the matter? Did your mother or father try
to prevent you from going out?”
Elizabeth shook her head, but
wouldn’t meet his eye. “No, neither tried to stop me leaving the house.”
“Then what is it? Something has
happened, I can tell.”
At last she looked up, and he
noted tears in her eyes. “Fitzwilliam, what are we doing?” she asked. “This is
madness—you and I both know that your family will never approve of me.”
“What happened?” he pressed
again.
Elizabeth sighed. “Mamma spoke
to me yesterday,” she confessed. “She is aware of my attachment to you but
reminded me that a match between us is unlikely to be accepted. She said I
should not set my hope of happiness so far above my station.”
Darcy lifted her chin with his
finger until their gazes met. “My love, did I not promise you I would think of
something?”
“Fitzwilliam, what can we do?!”
Elizabeth cried, pushing away from him. “We are fools, blinded by our passion
and the impetuosity of our youth!”
“Gretna Green.”
She spun back to him, her shock
evident. Darcy stepped closer and took her hands in his. “Elizabeth, I have it
all planned! In fact, we really must be going if we hope to put enough distance
between us that no one will catch us and prevent our marrying over the anvil.”
“Fitzwilliam, you’re not
serious!” Elizabeth said.
Darcy nodded, his face split
with a huge grin. “I am. Call me an impetuous youth if you like—I call myself a
man in love! If we go now and marry in Scotland, my family will have no choice
but to accept you.”
“Your father will disinherit
you, surely,” she suggested.
“Unlikely. I am his only son,
and Georgiana is still a child,” Darcy replied. “The family will be angry, I do
not doubt, but when we are married it will not matter! Now come, George is
waiting, and likely to be getting very nervous.”
“You mean the steward’s son?”
“I sometimes forget you have
been my sister’s companion for less than a year,” Darcy said as he took her by
the hand and began to lead her away from the tree. “Yes, I mean George Wickham.
Though he is the son of one of our servants, he has been a friend since my
childhood—my father is his godfather. That is how I just know that our marriage will be accepted once my parents realize it
cannot be undone.”
He paused then and turned back
to her. “Do you not want to marry me, Elizabeth?”
Darcy stumbled back a few steps
when she threw herself at him forcefully, wrapping her arms tightly about his
waist. “Oh, Fitzwilliam, of course I
want to marry you! I want to be your wife more than anything else in all the
world! I’m sorry, I just got scared when you seemed to be avoiding me this last
week, and then my mother spoke yesterday of sending me away so I could get over
you—”
Darcy silenced her by pressing a
finger to her lips. “Forgive me for causing you to doubt,” he said. “Had you
gone away, I would only have followed you.”
Elizabeth smiled brilliantly and
hummed happily as he took her hand again and led her toward where their
transportation waited.
“Fitzwilliam, you said you
planned for this all last week, yes?”
He chuckled. “Not in those
words, but yes. Why do you ask?”
“Well, by that I assume you have
a trunk with a few days’ worth of clothes for yourself, or a bag packed, but
what about me?” Elizabeth pressed. “If we leave now, I shall have nothing to
wear but this one dress!”
“Not true, my love!” Darcy
replied with a laugh. “Did not you take my sister into Kympton on Wednesday
last to be measured for three new gowns—and did not my mother gift you the
funds to commission three new gowns for yourself also?”
“Yes. They were to be ready this
afternoon, but you know Miss Darcy was unwell today. I had planned to take her
there again tomorrow to collect them if she is feeling better.”
“Not necessary—I sent George for
them already. He claimed my sister’s also so as not to arouse suspicion; yours
are in the trunk with my things,” Darcy told her.
“Goodness, Fitzwilliam, you
really do have it all planned!” said Elizabeth with a laugh.
Several minutes’ walk let them
to a little-used trail that ran through the woods, which Darcy then led
Elizabeth along at a fast clip. She asked where they were headed, and he
informed her that he had told his father he would be at the hunting cabin for a
night or two, and that was where his friend waited.
“That covers you, my dear,” said
she, “but not me. When I don’t return from my walk, someone is bound to come
looking for me.”
“Ah, but I have covered that as
well,” Darcy said. “In front of my father, I asked Wickham to fetch you and
take you to Kympton to pick up the gowns you commissioned, as Georgiana has
been eager to see them; I said having them early might brighten her spirits.
That will take you some time, surely.”
Elizabeth laughed again. “Your
sister has been rather vocal in her excitement about the gowns. I’m only sorry
you had to involve her in this scheme, even peripherally.”
“As am I, but she will forgive
us. You know she adores you.”
It seemed forever before they
finally arrived at the cabin, where Darcy and Elizabeth found Wickham pacing
before the chaise.
“It’s about bloody time!” he
cried. “I was beginning to wonder if your father saw through our ruse or
something.”
The young man, who was Darcy’s
junior by one year, looked to Elizabeth with a smile. “’Ello, Miss Gardiner.
Must say, I never thought stodgy old Darcy here would be willing to elope with
a maid.”
Elizabeth stiffened beside him.
“I am not a maid, sir,” she said. “I am Miss Darcy’s companion.”
Wickham laughed. “So you get
paid more for doing less work—either way, you’re still one of us little people
the likes of him usually ignore the existence of.”
Darcy growled. “Wickham, watch
your tongue!”
“You call this boy your friend,
Fitzwilliam?” Elizabeth observed archly. “It’s a wonder he’s not revealed your
plan to Mr. Darcy to prevent us going away, with a mouth like that.”
A guffaw that had him bending
over erupted from Wickham, who slapped his thighs before standing straight and
holding his hands up in a position of surrender. “All right there, put the
verbal pistols away. I mean no offense, truly. I’m just genuinely surprised. My
old friend never seemed the type to elope, especially with a girl he’s only known
a few months.”
“Time alone does not determine
intimacy, Mr. Wickham,” Elizabeth said firmly. “Fitzwilliam and I are in love.”
“I’ll say, Miss Gardiner, if
Darcy here’s willing to risk the earl’s wrath by running away to Gretna Green
with you,” Wickham replied. “Well, come along you lovey-doves, let’s get going
so we’ve a good head start before anyone realizes I did not find you on your solitary ramble and take you into Kympton for
Miss Darcy’s dresses.”
***
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of Forever, available for purchase from Amazon on Kindle — also in
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Contest open until January 25,
2022. Good luck!
***
Christine, like many a JAFF
author before her, is a long-time admirer of Jane Austen‘s work, and she hopes
that her alternate versions are as enjoyable as the originals. She has plans to
one day visit England and take a tour of all the grand country estates which
have featured in film adaptations, and often dreams of owning one. Christine
lives in Ohio and is already at work on her next book.
Links:
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Thank you for the excerpt... I got worried when Mr. wickham new of the plan...Given his character and his hopes, i also wondered why he didn't sell this info to the older Mr D. Enjoyed the story. can't wait to read all!!!
ReplyDeleteYou should worry about Wickham. You should (almost) always worry about Wickham!
Delete(I say almost because I did redeem him in a prior novel)
Such an interesting premise and one I've never read before.
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